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So far, I've really enjoyed the story. The one thing I wish people wouldn't do is post comments like "omg mc so returded" or "why dont you try dis!!1!1!!!". It's really annoying considering that while the MC is kinda dumb, compared to this generation now, I swear he's a prodigious genius.
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Review after reading 19 chapters.Grammar: 5/5. I have no complaints whatsoever about the grammar of this book. There are close to zero errors and the sentence structuring is top notch. Overall, a 5/5 for me.Story: 5/5 So far, the story has been intruiging and captivating. They are no cliche tropes and the story is comedic as well. The characters actually have personalities and dont feel like blank slates. The interactions are funny and nice to read. Overall, the story so far has been refreshing. Straight 5/5 for me.World Building: Spot on is the only phrase i can use to describe the world building of this novel. Its detailed and realistic, 2 ingredients for any novel with excellent world building. I feel like i actually have a direction when reading the story. Another 5/5 for me.The MC’s are excellent in my book. The twins have personalities that compliment each other and I can actually feel the brotherhood between them.This story is simply a gem. Read it if you want to read something new and engaing. If the author keeps up the good work, I can easily see this story becoming one of the best, if not the best, cultivation novels on this site.
Hi. I'm just starting this novel. Here are some recommendations from me.❤️ Jack's top 10 ❤️01) Lord of the Mysteries02) Way of the Devil03) The Devil's Cage04) The Legendary Mechanic05) Gamers of the Underworld06) My House of Horrors07) The City of Terror08) Low Dimensional Game09) Enlightened Empire (Webnovel original)10) Black Tech Internet Café SystemIm actually reading more than 20 novels at the moment, but I'm only posting my 10 most favorite ones here.
Excellent story, the begin was very stylish and interesting, lots of info dump which the author must reduce but rest all was good. Action packed and thrilling which I liked.Hope the author continues his work...
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