Glorious Money Making Method

Unlike your first book this mc is really not great.Naive Stupidprideful The story is interesting but very slow.The pov change so early in the story to show other characters is very bad in my opinion because I think side characters and mobs shouldn’t get so much screen time. The whole nationalsm like fanatics of the vampire race is also very annoying and I feel good that they lost because of how they act.

Will read after you reach 40 chapter !. .

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Its...... actually good? the pacing is neither too slow nor too fast, it makes you feel like time has passed way too quickly, I for some feel like there's some "Evolution begins from a big tree" Vibe and maybe that's why I am being biased (I also adore dungeon mc novels).

     And he was back in the pit of poverty again.

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'Attack!!'

Grant got out his bed staring at the spot where the hallway connected to his room, utterly confused.