I’m lamenting at the missed opportunity for naming the mc “Bob”. If the mc had been named Bob, then...Bob the builderCan we fix it?Bob the builder Yes we can!
It's well written and an amzing novel! Cant wait for more chapters author, keep it up like you always do. I recommend you all to read it for a great time and add it to library to keep updated on these very nice chapters. Great start!
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Nathan is not a character you would dislike. He is very likeable and so full of himself. He is so fun to read. It's such a good story, I can't wait to uncover more!
Zya is definitely a character some people aren't going to like too much. She the Misato of this Novel frfr, Asher is mentally a child when you think about it. Overall, novel is good so far, Bale got that whole lightskinned tendency to hype frfr. Bro keep hyping himself up. Skystrider will be Skystrider so I expect a large number of deaths or mayhem taking place.
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