Genshin Impact: Start by building the empire of frost

it's nice, although you know the conversation is a little awkward and all ,but the idea of the tech and wishes is quite interesting , it's just if only there's more chapters .

This was a terrific short read during the trial period, absolutely love the concept and world building whilst the characters are quite excellent as well. Hope this one makes it guys or we might be losing a gem

Honestly I don't know why I'm still reading this novel. It's frustrating. It's definitely a generic novel that you can find anywhere. A handsome MC that has no talent but manages to turn that around with heaven defying luck. What's frustrating is the MC's attitude towards others. He's always being so generous and giving favors away to people that he barely knows or has absolutely no connection to. Seriously, this idiot gets into fights with powerful enemies all because he can't leave these shameless morons alone? He forces himself into a lot of situations where the conflict could easily be avoided if he just ignored it. And why does he keep blushing when it comes to girls? He's able to slaughter left and right but when it comes to a little teasing he turns into a shy boy? Bah! Whether it's beautiful girls that are in trouble or shameless geezers and young masters trying to curry favor with him, I wish the MC would just grow a pair of... err a backbone... yeah, a backbone, and turn everyone away so he can focus on his cultivation and goals rather than getting sidetracked.

The MC is such a pushover with women. He let's them take advantage of him and can't ever go against them...also, as I'm reading more and more of these genre novels, I'm realizing that all you need is a pretty face with a chilly personality in order to use the MC. Is that the ideal type of girl that Chinese guys want?

The synopsis needs to be updated to help you get more readers.The narration needs a little more polishing and you would be there. The plotline is cool. I am looking forward to this project.

A surprisingly funny take on what can be considered a tired genre of webnovels, that being the "alternate world entertainment is lacking so I'll use my original world's ideas to get rich" trope.Sure it's like a lot of other works, but the author has made it just funny enough to keep me reading through the 60 chapter trial read.A highlight of the novel is the side characters, most of whom have no contact with the MC and are just living normal lives while becoming infatuated with the toys. Realistic depictions of kids and how they just so so so so NEED that new toy from the show, and then how to hide it from their parents, teachers, etc.The comedic aspects don't drag down the story, and only pop up every couple of chapters, often in unexpected ways. Like a joke that was innocuously set up a few chapters before a single line pays it off.I will say that the first ten chapters or so were written in a bit too much of an overview style that were a little off putting since it seemed distant and rushed, but after that it settled down and the pacing worked better.

I love the idea of a system based on unfillial and respect points however the author couldve written a better story with it as it started to devolve each chap

at this point i am not even shock anymore on pancakewitch creativity but i do hope that what is bugging doesn't come true.