Gamer In the Naruto Universe

On a pure writing quality, I can say this easily matches translated novels and even exceeds some of them. The world building is good, and the story arcs are innovative (for a xianxia). The power itself is also unique enough that I haven't seen it before.Now the biggest problem by far that I have noticed is the pacing. We're at 400+ chapters but still technically on the first arc (1.5 maybe?). The chapters itself, around the 100 mark became crazy short. Like you could fit 2/3 of these into a normal chapter. So these 400 are the equivalent of perhaps 150 normal chapters length wise. The actual plot is probably around 100? Combined with the general slow pacing its incredibly frustrating to read, and if it weren't for the general quality, I would have dropped this a while ago. Honestly would prefer author combines chapters and reduces cliffs. Defintely a book you would need to stockpile.That being said, this is still head and shoulders above most of the other originals, especially the drivel that are high ranked but chock full of plotholes and juvenile characters (the characterisation, not the actual age). The MC is naive but a quick learner (understandable considering his peasant background), isn't forced into idiotic actions. The general annoying xianxia cliches are minimized and characters other than the MC have more than 2 dimensions. Overall a definitly good read compared to the others on this site, but not amazing with serious pacing/length issues. So on this site, this is worth 5 stars, but on novelupdates and outside, probably 4. Recommend stockpiling between reads.

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Basically a rip off version of Bofuri or I don’t want to get hurt so I’ll max out my defense it’s like it but worse all the things that made Bofuri good this novel can said to arguably not have them your honestly better off just watching or reading Bofuri instead

if there is a god (on this site) I pray for this novel to be chosenThis novel actually deserves to be chosen, it's not cliche or basic at all!! The MC is actually a reasonable person who loves animals (and pokemon trains them to fight). What's not to like?Read it and see for yourself

The Story and Character are good. I haven't read any Racist remarks. The only Thing that need fixing is the editing and a bit of the Translation

This story deserves more chapters. It's been a while since you last updated it. There were some flaws in the writing, but other than that, it was okay. Keep it up.

MOOOOREEEEE, THE ONLY PROBLEM I HAVE FOR THIS NOVE IS THE UPDATES OF CHAPTERS

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