Each thrust brings out a moan, growing in a crescendo until Nemeya's every moan sounds like a small scream of pleasure. I'm not far off myself, and as I speed up the pace one last time
I'll give it a five star before I start the real review.So, first of all, too few chapters to truly judge the book, but I'll tell you guys my view.Let's start with the plot: -Unlike the novels out there that just have the plots bent by the author's will, here it seems realistic.Characters: -Just like the plot, the character have reactions like a normal human would. So, this part is a check as well.World building: - Can't say anything about it right now since not much of the world had been disclosed.Now to the main thing - Grammar: -To be honest, it's not that good.It breaks the flow, and the words are in a mess.So, I will say, it's bad.Overall: -If the grammar was better, then the story would've been more engaging, but that doesn't mean that it is not like that right now.It is good.The grammar part is a let down, but the other points make up for it.In conclusion - You should try reading it once.
The story has a powerful hook right from the start, appealing to every fictional reader. Kudos to the writer for this beautiful piece. The use of names for characters is also in alignment with the story's theme.
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