first of all there are too many problems in this novel I'm gonna elaborate on these one by one:1. this novel will make more sense in mc is not a reincarnated person but a normal person with a system. for example he doesn't use his future knowledge at all, all the calculations are done by the system to find the best company to invest in and mc just invest in and same will all the advance formula the system sell mc just buy from it. so i don't know why mc have to be an reincarnated person.2.in starting chapter it becomes a slow burn slice of life story (quite a few chapters dedicated to mc solving maths and physics formula that are just there as fillers) but when it comes to recruiting employees for his "Empire(which doesn't even establish yet)" he goes to the person in his hoodie and asks him to work for him, and as to why cause he will build a "empire(again)" which will matter in this world and the person agreed like seriously.3. The most important point- he was a 35 year old middle age working man that regressed to 2008 which makes him a 18 year old now you will think he is a 18 year old with the mental age of 35 years old but no, his mental age is of 18 year old, he doesn't have the emotional maturity of a 35 years old men.4. many people have noticed this and already commented: "beta simp mc" Yes mc is a simp let me explain- i) a 35 year mentally old man going after a 18 year old girl who he knows that she is a selfish girl who is only with him so that he could help her in study and assignment. and after knowing all this he still hopes that she will not abandon him, like seriously dude why don't you go and just beg her then she might just stay. I don't see any emotional maturity that comes with age and taking responsibility, that's why i suggested that this novel will do much better if mc is not a reincarnated person.p.s: To the author, i am sorry for my harsh words and criticism and i understand that you are a new author and still learning and you will surely become a great author. it's your novel and i have no right to criticize it but it's just my views on your novel which i think may help you in understanding the others prospective so that you can better refine your work. I'm also from india and it's rare to see an Indian writer and i just wanted to support you. my words may sound harsh, but my intention is just to help you. I hope you will not take it the wrong way. wishing you all the best for your future endeavours.
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