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mecha fights are crazy and the ending was not as predictable very good story for here

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although the story is not perfect it is stillfar better than other novels on this platform i dont mind the typo errors or grammatical mistakes as long as story is good i just hope the author will update soon

This is a good back to the past wish fulfillment in Hollywood. That is if you could get pass the atrocious grammar. I hope the author gets some beta or editor to actually help with the quality of the story.

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Overall the story is good. Please continue this masterpiece. Thank you for made this a free to read. I can't wait for the next update. First time the fantasy novel has well character development. XD

"Bartholomew," Darlton said.

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