Started reading yesterday and have caught up as of just a few minutes ago. I had been searching for a kingdom-building novel for some time now and this really scratches that itch. The characters Jun meets feel genuine and fleshed out, the dynamics/feelings between them seem realistic. The worldbuilding is also quite detailed and the video game elements give it a nice spin opposed to a regular apocalypse novel. The writing is decent and stays consistent throughout the chapters I've read, slight improvements have been noted but there's still some grammar mistakes here and there but one easily reads past those, it's not annoying enough for me to call it a flaw. And I'm sure that the Author over the time of writing this novel will slowly improve his style. All in all I love the novel so far and have enjoyed every minute of reading it, keep on trucking Author and I hope this gets the attention it deserves. ** if you're in need of reviews maybe swap some with other writers on the Webnovel forums, that could also give you an insight into what other writers think could improve or what you do really well. Thanks for writing Author! (っ˘з(˘⌣˘ )
Excellent grip of language and taught process 👏👏 Fantabulous storyline✨✨. Keep posting us the delightful work💖.. Keep up the good work 💐💐. I'm thrilled!! Eagerly waiting for ur upcoming story track post it as soon as possible 🥳🥳
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Good story overall writing is good not that many mistakes and characters are good for now plot is good and the world sounds amazing so I'd give this atleast a 4 out of 5
I have read 30+ chapter and i must say that its a good novel , the mc is dark but still care for people , the only bad thing is that we dont really know anything about the mc .I recommend this novel .😁
The whole scenario feels forced, and a comedy feels cheap, he gets everything too easily, and author is that creating problems life and right, solving the problem after and creating another cheap problem plot, and transition from one arch to another is smooth as a rocky road.
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