I had enjoyed this until the 8 yr old had to carry a useless but pretty Scarlet Johansson because she acts worse than a 8 yr old and is creepy in her behavior towards a kid. And i swear the author cant talk about a female without stating how pretty she is every two seconds. Considering he is a 8 yr old this seems to be over done and just turns creepy. Somehow authors can even turn a story about a young kid be surrounded by beautiful woman. Bet if he was old enough this would be harem. And how creepy the author is it may still turn out to be harem
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