Feel Free

I have been reading this story from the very beginning.  I wasn't too keen on it at first,  but the writing became better and I started to enjoy it immensely.  Keep up the great work Eve. I truly admire your talent.

First of all don’t judge this novel based on author’s previous work. This novel is totally different and it is unbelievable how an author could improve so much.I will do this review in two parts, first part is for first 400 chapters and second part is for rest of the chapters.First half of the novel is full of political intrigue, strategical battles and lots of scheming. Our MC is shameless, petty, revengeful, narcissistic flower boy. He is extremely intelligent with no physical power at all.He becomes son-in-law and helps his wife’s household to go through their difficulties. First half of the novel is all about rising in political ladder and a bit of knowing the world. World is mysterious, with lots of hidden mysteries. THE ONLY THING I HATE ABOUT FIRST HALF IS useless, stupid references. SO MANY REFERENCES!!!! SO MANY REFERENCES!!! SO MANY REFERENCES!!! I mean 35 out of 100 (I.E 35% or less of first half) chapters are only about references.Second half isn’t that much about politics it is about MC knowing the mysteries of the ancient civilization, their extraordinary inventions, unearthing them and studying them. Using their technology and modern earth technology to create something new. Our MC doesn’t become strong until last 100 chapters of the novel.The second half of the novel is about mysteries and some sci fi elements are involved. There is a huge twist in the end involving everything that happened throughout the novel. The ending is not bad but it does not do justice to the novel.In the end novel becomes somewhat of sci fi genre. And If you know little about science then maybe you will find ideas of author little stupid and preposterous. But for me it was in bearable range.

"I was in a daze after being attacked. I fought so hard to not fall asleep." (Melissa)

Players has levelled up to Level 10!

*Stella, the receptionist girl who received all the interviewees comes to the waiting room with a smile*"Miss Marika Laine, it's time for your interview the boss will now see you."

- El elegido sabe cuando ha encontrado a su sucesor, su decision es unánime y la que mayor cuenta, ¿o lo haz olvidado Alice? - el llamado elegido la interrumpió dejando sin deseos de continuar a todos los del clan.

The rest of the breakfast, she and Ryker talked. First, it was awkward, just small tidbits of greeting. Their skill sets, memories of before the outbreak. The entire time, Aymelek was cataloguing each and every response, action, and movement she could about him. From the nervous tick of bouncing his knee, to the subtle flicker of his eyes darting about, as if searching for a potential boyfriend to come kick his ass.

mainit na ang araw at may paminsan minsang ihip ng hangin. Tamang tama para maging mabilis ang pagpapatuyo ko ng mga damit.