All in all, a solid novel.There aren’t too many chapters so I can make a concrete review. Howver, from what I’ve read so far (30 chaps or so) I would say that it’s quite solid.The concept is fun, the dialogues are nice, and the world background is also slowly starting to take shape.That said, there are a couple of things that could improved.Firstly, not sure if it was just me, but at some point you used an emoji, and my laptop couldn’t read it, so I was confused for a bit. Could be just me, and it wasn’t really a big problem. The pacing is fine since the world is starting to take shape, so no problem there. Character is fine, but you what should be worked on more are side characters.They do feel alive, but it can be slightly improved. Just give them more unique quirks, and some motivation and goals to which they aspire to achieve.Anyhow, I really do like the story. Keep up the good work.
Kudos to the author! I have fun reading and so far so good! I only found few grammatical errors but didn't mind it. Still the author made his narration fun so it will be enjoyable. The chapter was still few but I know that it has potential in the future. And again, thank you for making a wonderful novel for me to read!
Hello, its evanstorm here. First, I would just like to say I am not ones of those pay for review people that appear. Now onto my review. F**k I love this story alot. To me who generally does not like this genre, it feels very refreshing. The characters are easy to love, easy to hate and incredibly interesting. The story basis is an overused one but told in way that actually makes it feel new and exciting, so for me who gives the bare minimum reviews to only the stories i think deserve it, I can only say one thing here. WELL DONE. I will be looking forward for when the story comes forward properly and give thanks for simply being able to read this.
Grammar is terrible. Plot makes 0 sense. There is 0 world building, and I still don't know what the **** is happening. Lastly, the retardation level is over 9000.I'll give it a 5/5
okish novel.... better than many translations, but goes downhill after chapter 30 where he is trying to act some sort of hero or instead of simply selling codes goes and wastes 10 chapters or more in city. He should be busy training, farming skill points , lvling up and collecting rare codes. Things happene for MC's convince and 30% of novel feels like filler ......
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