Hilarious, fun Victoria makes me laugh ... continue job well done I am glad Sheryl is out do not let her come near him please develop the story between Tyler ,Althea and her cutie Kai
Love the story but can the author reveal atleast few of the suspense in the story. Just a suggestion it would be great if the pace would be a bit faster. waiting for the update. your loyal reader
it's a cute story, only the jumping around time frame can get a little confusing. I think a note at the top of each chapter that mentions *present* or *flashback ___ years* would be beneficial for the reader. Other than that. I really like the story and am looking forward to updates:)
The best part of your story is Characterization and language❤. The plot twist is amazing, For a moment a/f 1st chapter I thought she will find another nicest man, but you changed the entire scenario. So unimaginable twist. I hated Tyler in 1st chapter, but now chapters later I kind of love him.
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