Eyes Above The Heavens

This story has interesting concepts but, the grammar is really atrocious. There are other stories on this site that are even worse then this, however, I'm not going to be nice because of this. I understand that some people keep saying in the comments that the writing quality gets better at ch 18 or around ch 32. In the end I could not drag my self across the floor to reach such chapters.One of the main points I don't understand about the author is why if he has an editor already, just ask him to redo all your previous chapters. The author is dragging away potential readers due to not editing his starting chapters.Point 2. I feel like I'm reading a children's book due to all the sound effects. These sound effects take away from a story unless a child is reading them because most children don't know what most stuff sound like. That is why most children's books have the cow goes "moo" or the sheep goes "baa". It gives kids a 3 in 1 training. Training their vocals, reading comprehension and their understanding of what stuff sounds like.Point 2b. As an ***** with the understanding of the English language and sounds. I feel offended when I see a written sound effect. I know what a sword sound makes when it hits something with different densities. It just irks me because its like the author is saying "This is what it sound like to me and you should believe me." No... I don't believe sirens go "siren...siren" or swords go "slice" like their talking. Even the sound effects are off putting.Point 3: The cultivation is strange. I understand that being Original in concept is what authors should do. However, the cultivation with the steam punk vib (engine) and cultivation just don't mix well. I like the part about the soul-bonding, but, it could have been better executed.Point 4: The animals are puppets as far as I can tell. The start of the novel it shows the personality of the creatures and that was a good start, however, right as the soul binding was completed It was like the creatures them selves don't have their own thoughts anymore. It is more along the line as the people turn them into puppets then project their emotions into their soul-bonded puppet to be more like the host.Point 5: The MC does not have a solid goal. Yes, he wants to be in that championship thing but that does not make him insane about doing the most efficient cultivation training which most people fail at. The reason I do not believe this is due to the fact he lived a very normal life with his family. No sane person would tarnish such a thing. If the story showed he had a desire to be recognized due to certain bad pasts then I would believe it more.There are other points I could point out. But I don't know if the author can even read English so adding anymore would just be a waste of time for me and the reader of this wall of text.

Originally I gave this story a 1.8 after the first 12 chapters then the next chapter the author finally makes the MC better and then immediately after that makes the MC a dumb beta again lol then somehow the princess that’s trying to manipulate him somehow gets a group of teenagers summoned to the MCs world to save them...honestly if I could rate this 0/5 I would

based on the description this is gonna be hilarious so hop on and let's go over this together shall we? oh, and if ur reading this have a good day/Night/evening and life all together😇

Wow, this is really good 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽 great job Author ❤️❤️❤️ you really did your work of catching the reader's attention with your first chapters. Well I'm already hooked, can't wait to see how the story progresses.

Welp, here I am giving my own novel a five star rating... pretty odd but I have no choice, I need those ratings and reviews so bad. Anyway, I thought I'd be dropping this right after the contest ended but the ideas just raided my mind and I can't stop typing... For my other book, I simply feel lazy.I can't really assure frequent updates since I'm always busy... but then, I hope you stick around to find out what'll happen to our MC in the very end.

The story has a lot of potential and I must say I enjoyed reading the first few chapters. Keep up the good work. I really enjoyed your novel I hope you continue this wonderful novel until the end

Melissa thought long and hard.

This actually infuriated it, whenever it used an attack it missed but all his attacks landed on the beast perfectly. His fighting experience in the realm also extended in real life, so by fighting thousands of spider type beast he was able to easily find proper acupoints and weaknesses of the spider emperor.