Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale. One more thing - the chapters are getting shorter. Please lengthen them.
Come on man, your locking chapters that have already been translated by someone else behind a paywall with no guarantee that you are going to be translating any further. At this point, I am nearly sure that you just used the other translator's work and tweaked a few words here and there for every chapter.
Good storyline the plot flows continuously to the next chapter. Good character development that emphasises the protagonist personality so well. A good read.
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A very unique approach to story-telling. I can tell its going to be a great SoL read going ahead. The writing is very solid and keeps you immersed into the story even with its deep roots in reality, I am really looking forward to more!
This.......a SUPERB and Worth While READ...Review Proper after chapter 12Writing Quality. The narratives are well-written and zero grammar errors so far. Or if there are some, I'm just engrossed reading the story to notice 😌.Stability of Updates. I see no problem here. The author seems to have stable updates so far. Plus it is already 100 plus chapters perfect for binge reading.Story Development. From the first chapter until the next, everything is flowing smoothly. Although from introducing the world background and such, it didn't feel some info. dumps due to the remarks of Voice lol. Character Design. They are all well-rounded from Evin, to voice and the other charas all have a distinct persona with each other.World Background. Very interesting, with the first grade, Emperor, Empress, and others. I look forward to more.Overall, this book is a great read and greatly recommended. And I must warn you, once you start reading you will not be able to stop anymore and you realize you're already far from the first chap.Great Work! Keep it up, author! All the best for the WSA
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