DxD: Lustful Ascension

Dia menatapku dengan aneh, seolah dia melihatku untuk pertama kalinya. Saya tahu saya biasanya mengucapkan omong kosong tetapi itu tidak berarti bahwa saya tidak dapat berbicara dengan cerdas. Ini benar-benar menghina.

"Hey... Open one account for me also" Bomb Bakri started pleading to Sam.

A horn blew and the orc tide started to finally receed. The orc ran like a massive bull rush out of there and the army gave chase like lions for a prey.

Tang San took out a silver coin and handed it to him, "Senior, truly am embarrassed, just now was my lack of manners."

Time Machine

They started getting out of the forest and gathered at the middle, They're at the middle of a forest with lush green surrounded them, where they're standing is a circular clear field with 20 feet radius. When they're at the middle of the circular field they started unpacking and checking what they packed. they have 12 notebooks, 4 ballpens, 3 water bottles, a bag of doritos, and 4 bags.

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

What I heard next horrified me, three loud impacts could be heard then someone put a person in the driver's seat. I noticed that the man was already dead with a broken face. The man's face was so broken that you can't see any semblance of its former self anymore. Shaking with fear I cried again while noticing that footsteps coming closer to the other side of the car. 'Am I going to die?' I thought to myself as I saw a hand closing in the neck of the woman strangling. The woman looking at me as she tried to struggle from the grasp of the attacker. A snapping sound was heard and the woman lay still, her hold on me was slowly loosening but I can still feel her trying her best to hold me in her arms.

I'm fairly new to writing and decided to try something out online. 'Soul:A!' isn't going to be as long a story as the other novels, but I hope anyone who reads it will find it interesting!Since I'm a bit new to this, it would also help if I received feedback on how I could get better. I'm open to any form of constructive criticism ^^. Thank you for reading!

OMG what a pretty cover, please don't change it. Also, I'll support your work as much as I can, good luck author

This 5* is to encourage author to post more chapters daily. One notification for one chapter is not worth my time. Please consider. Thank you.

It's an alright book, however, I simply cannot stand the mc so yeah. This is important for any book obviously. The mc basically has the intelligence of a brick. He is dumb af. When reading books I like the mc to at least have a spec of intelligence to them when reading. It helps with the immersion of the book when reading. Like, the tipping point for me was when he met Connor, was it? It was just overall an sht show. It was so random to the point of stupidity. He was fighting in the wave of monsters, he saves him. All good, but then he lets him join his party leaving out the fact he is like 11 levels ahead of him. The mc shows him is an ultra-secret class he could get killed for. Let's this random dude follow him around and in his home. The uses his secret ability right in front of him because he "forgot" about him. Then decides to give basically all his secrets away to him. All to a RANDOM ass dude, we know nothing about. It's a joke tbh.... Too painful to carry on for me, but if you can stand this sort of interaction you may like the story. He is op af just needs time to grow. Not many descriptions either so yeah.