Great job author, I find myself really enjoying this novel. The only gripe I have with the story is that sometimes it loses focus like in fog battle, I think we could’ve entirely done away with that part of the story in 1-2 chapters but instead the pacing got bogged down by the in-depth description of the battle and of what was going on on the side of Adhanian camp. I think a brief summary would’ve sufficed and we should always return the focus on the protagonist and what is happening around him. Alexander is the greatest attraction of the series and reading about great of exploits of secondary characters is cool-and-all but please don’t spend 5-10 chapters on that alone
Why cant they add watch the advertisement option to unlock chapters? Is that not a thing anymore? Also milking us of SS, to me seems pretty ridiculous after only releasing around 150 chapters. At least make the chapter accessible with SS after around 300 chapters.
This is my first time writing story through my grammar and update are not stable but to the reader I expect to take some time and write a review, so that I can know you opinionSo take some time and write a reviewThanks you for reading and supporting.
The cover and synopsis had me excited. The plot is very interesting. It's a well written story. Th world building and dialogues are really well done. I found the start a bit confusing but as I continued reading things become clearer. I really liked it, and would like to recommend others to read it!
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Tbh i like the novel a lot. op mc ,new bloodline awesome background story with many reveals as the story progresses...funny stuff and awesome battles ..moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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