Dimensional Soldier

Nice it's okay I just like your bookearly to get excited but reading is the best

🤩 had me hooked from the start! I really like the way you tell the story, MC seems like a super awesome guy by the way he cares for his little brother and then is forced to this other world bc he cares for him to much 🥺 Your writing quality is really nice for not knowing english very well so No complaints from me there. The flow is smooth too not too fast. your doing great 🥳

Translation is messed up but good character and story development all around 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈

What this novel needs is an editor. I like this type of novels and its frustrating to read a novel with broken words. The story has no problems so far till chapter 25

Great work for first time I hope you will keep posting new chapters as soon as possible I waiting.Hope to se new characters and good character development

Keep it going to write good story..i really enjoy it...👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍

An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.

Veer laughed and said "How can I see them? We are in different worlds and it is not easy crossing the boundary unless you have achieved perfection in the stage of abstraction. Also, it is not easy for them to enter the mortal world due to its low soul strength restriction."