Destroying the Earth, Shaking the Heavens

And all that glitters is gold

All that glitters is gold

Aon: I talked to him but he is not going to listen anyone.

This story is good. Just don't rush it. I would like to see more about Karl's corrupt past. I will give it a rating of 4.4 for now

I wanted to like this.  The author appears to be good at writing and has some creative ideas, but 1 the world just never developed..  it’s some sort of school but the teachers and school layout not only make no sense, they break the suspension of disbelief.  I’m pretty sure a school, even a magic school can’t be run the way it’s written.  Add to that a mysterious main char where all you get are a bunch of disjointed flashbacks to sort of give you an idea of who he is and you find a guy you just can’t relate to which was the finishing touch for me. Maybe it gets better somewhere in the thirtieth chapter or so, but I’ll never know cause I have lost all interest in looking further.I’ve often heard that you only have a paragraph or 2 to interest someone in reading your book.  And a couple of chapters to get them hooked enough to read to the end.  Took way to long and if this starts to be a book you need to pay to open chapters, it won’t work cause you don’t hook them before the paywall.Good luck with your next try

Your concept is really impressive! The ideas you’ve introduced are innovative and engaging, creating a solid foundation with great potential. Keep pushing forward with this direction—your hard work and creativity are definitely paying off. Looking forward to seeing how it continues to evolve!

Delete my old comment cuz its getting drowned o(￣┰￣*)ゞjust want to say that this novel has already reach the end of Volume 2I'll read your suggestion and criticism, give me a review if you like my book（；´д｀）ゞ

As a Day-1 Wuthering Waves fan.... U have the celestial Yandere's blessings