Has potential, and is a _unique idea, and you seem dedicated and passionate about it, but I think some modifications are needed:1. Add some relevant tags. Almost no one on this platform is gonna read something that doesn't have at least a few tags. besides the platform won't push and spread it out if you don't set it. 2. I can't differ which text is for the system and which text is the narrative; I mean put the system on a format like a common one is just putting the system commands or prompts or status between '[ 'system' ] or something like that. keep it up!
A Novel with rich literal content , it has good story development and wide universal setting .....I'm the author of this novel , let me take you through the lens of time to the Primordial era , When God's were yet born and the Heavens were established
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