It could have done better. The whole point of harem genre is to grab beauties. I felt like the aithor started out great and then grew muddle headed. Maybe he was trying to attract a different wave of readers but why introduce a fem. Char as being super beautiful only to ignore her and walk away.
Point of Gilbert the lewd dragon was just ??? Teaching him a yin technique that can go awry if he doesn't control himself. Small things like MC being able to clear Bellinda's birthmark but it going nowhere.
Not even done with the first chapter and the names are wrong and mixed up as it is in this whole series. I’m guessing the author doesn’t edit or proof read anything. The books are great with the story but so annoying how there are so many errors that never get fixed.
I am liking the story and definitely hooked. My personal opinion, I wish Amara wasn't so naive after what happened to her when she was younger. However, as Amara's story develops the personality type seems to make sense. I look forward to reading more chapters and watching for those updates.
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Point of Gilbert the lewd dragon was just ??? Teaching him a yin technique that can go awry if he doesn't control himself. Small things like MC being able to clear Bellinda's birthmark but it going nowhere.