Review after reading 1400+ chapters...nonstop...kekekekek....Disclaimer: It really is addicting just like the author says.I stopped reading other novels just so that i could catch up with this novel and man....i gotta admit that it was worth it. I am looking forward to next chapters author-san. Seems like this novel is ending which makes me sad cuz i'm gonna miss them(William and his group).I wish Author-san would write their next generations as well.
Before i read the last line of the synopsis i thought it would be like, the system taking control over his body and going after some op girl and making her fall in love with the mc and after dual cultivating with her the mc won't know how to deal with her and it would lead to various situations,Basically a slice of life.But after fully reading the synopsis and reviews it seems to be trash
Hello, first thing first, I was overwhelmed by how you tried to describe the world and it's system. I was confused and had to try to read it again. There aren't many grammatical errors but try not using repeated words. You have a great plot, but your world background and character design needs improvement.
Keep it on u guy.really a grate full thought and creativity. Please make story much faster u can. I am seriously waiting for all the parts loving it loving amd the guys who are viewing please support him with star, stone, reviews & cmmnt this guy really deserves some respect. ❤️❤️Please support him i think he is a over coming author a beginner but with lot of talent
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