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I was always into fantasy. It is a good plot with vivid description of the surroundings and even the emotions of the characters are well explainedWell Written!!!!
Not a bad story, only downside is that the author seems to have dropped it. They did make a comment on the last chapter using a different account a few months ago saying they would continue it but they never did.
Reading what you’re writing would be a good way to improve.Nothing is explained or shown, only told. Almost everything is reliant on prior knowledge.Try working on the “don’t tell, show” rule.
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