Damien's Hellverse

Just gonna say... Stacy be the real og, she a homie. 4.6 stars because I don't feel the story really progressed fast enough, at chap 35 nothing has changed a sufficient amount given its been 35 chaps. He still has the same 2 girls, same problems, nothing new since chap 1 (other than getting 2 of the 3 girls, of course).Other than story development being a little slow 🐌 It's top notch 👌Worthy of the 1st place it has 🏆

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System/game stories are not my thing but this was pretty good! Sage is a very relatable character that the audience can easily sympathize with. I like how the author describes actions in this story. The part I didn't like was when the author would put text in [* I don't mind sound effects or noises being written like that but sometimes the author would write stuff like [*busy*]. It doesn't make sense to me and there were also a few grammatical issues. However, the rest of the story was pretty good!

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This perfect painting system was very malicious and fierce!

[He knows that I'm lying]

After he parked his car, he went a few meters away to where the junkyard was. It was about 2 acres, the size of a city block. After he made sure no one was watching, he transformed into his slime form and devoured anything he couldn't use as a mechanic. "There is a lot of stuff here". Winston thought, but then he did the slime equivalent of a shrug and started absorbing.

One more thing is that they spend an average of 10 years in the academy but can be called to the front lines at any time. (Names of those called are posted on the 'war' board every Tuesday and they report to the flight lanes to go over the wall along with the full fledged soldiers every midday on Saturday the same week.