The Novel has a promising plot with likable characters. They feel lifelike. someone you could relate with. The use of real-world locations makes imagining the story better. Although it's not perfect but still I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
I feel his system was well made, the author does well with incorporating it into tye business world and the story. I love how well made the book is, my only wish would be for the author to put more work into his worldbuilding
The writing could be improved a bit, in terms of like the spelling mistakes i have seen(i could only remember 1 rn; in chapter 3 or 4 idk) and the asymptomatic writing which drives the reading into deep complexities is good but overdone, or should i say, its noticeable (and it kinda shouldn’t be, it should be more natural); and the genre of the complex wording you use is also repetitive, i felt. The 5th chapter made me feel it for sure; i really loved it, that’s what i would say your biggest strength is, try to implement the same highs and lows in your other chapters in a more holistic manner, sometimes it can be done by giving hints or a little bit of anxiety at play; or should i say, make the people remember your chapters distinctively. As so they can easily narrate what happens in which chapter and so on; rn i can only talk about the first 2 and the 5 th(with excitement and with a distinctive feel about these chapters) out of my mind without rereading it.Anyway, huge respect for you my G👊.I wanted to be as harsh of a critic as i could be, because i saw you asking for some criticism and in general i don’t like the Indian influence in my reading but this novel takes the inspiration from the mythological aspects really well (in such a way that doesn’t really make me cringe) so thats something to look up to.
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