Other than quite a few spelling mistakes throughout the story chapters, the plot and characters are good. Definitely one of the better stories I have read, I certainly got engrossed in it fairly quickly. It doesn’t feel too slow at the begining and the Mc acts how you would expect, especially from being in a new environment with things he’s never seen before. And the Author does a great job of making you hate a character with a passion one moment, and the next have you actually start liking them. Definitely reccomend giving this a read, though I do feel it depends on the person whether you fully enjoy or mildly enjoy this story. Regardless, it’s written well, needing only some minor editing. Give a few chapters a read yourself and decide from there, at least 10 chapters would be my recommendation. Simply because opinions differ throught the first few chapters in every story and 10 feels the most optimal for deciding whether something is a go-to or no go. Happy reading!
been reading this novel 3× and it's really, really good, except some minor grammars all in all it's A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.specially the a father in marvel, I hope you continue that story, I'm a fan of marvel that's why and your plots and theme are amazing making me wanting more.
Come back author! This is a villianess novel as the MC tries to prevent being killed off as she builds up power and experiements with the system. She ain't given cheats and the world is unforgiving as soon as she tries to pop her head out at a young age being a young female. Updates can use some work but everything is top tier in this novel!
didn't gave review in a long time about the story it's very good other than making the mc rely on the system but it's just happens on the starting arc's and and leaving the mc and people related to himall are chicl'e typical xianxia type.overall the story is to my liking i don't know about the others.🗿🍷
The concept in which the novel is revolving around is good. But its good to improve on your Writing as character development and dialogues are getting butchered in between. hope you do well.
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