This is a very good novel. While it does get repeated a bit, it does a lot of things well. One of those things is having respectable characters outside of the mc like Monk Daiming. I personally think that Monk Daiming is one of the most respectable characters in a novel, and that's telling something.
I love the character development, grammar, and spelling. I also love the fact that shin is a healer but am disappointed that he is slowly transforming into a cliche mc who is either a dual class or abandoning his healing for high combat power. Please understand, combat power isn't everything. I love shins uniqueness and that would disappear real fast if he continues this path. Every other wuxia novel has high combat power mcs, and they all become gods at the end. This novel has a chance to explore the political and social impacts of shin being a PURE healer, exploring the healing arts in greater depth and detail, as well as increasing its popularity by becoming a non cliche novel unlike every other novel. I admire your writing style, and if you are reading this I would like to tell you that your work is the best out of all the original novels I have read. Please don't let Shin's uniqueness disappear. It is the thing which sets him apart from other mc's who are all combat power hungry. let him become a pioneer, and make him a healer.
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Ah~A shameless 5-star author review!This novel has a perfect blend of both an ordinary urban world to a complex fanasty system! Whether in landscapes, buildings, cultures, or even races!The writing quality and update frequency is consistent and stable. With little to no errors in its grammar or even the timing between uploads!Characters here are both dynamic and devolping throughout the story. Whether it’s a Tsundere childhood crush to a cool headed Kendo Club Captain. Moreover, the characters are varied from a loveable Yandere to a adorable Femboy!*Cough* *Cough*Who were all rooting for...*Cough* *Cough*FInally the story devolpment is clear and well paced. Through multiple Arcs that will devolp the world and characters, along with giving Oliver the time he needs to shine.Really, the story is well thought out and might even make you shed a few tears. Of course, a fight might break out in the comments, about who is the best waifu!( We Encourage It! )Femboy is the best, so the fighting isn’t really needed.
Slightly confused at what im reading. Im at chapter 205 and literally the world building of this novel leaves much to desire. The premise of the book definitely starts off on a high note but at some point as a reader you literally say aloud “wtf is going on?!”. Theres no foreshadowing to speak of, the mc deviates between natural speech to prim and proper “ye old english” with bits of slang thrown in here and there and to cap it all of… the MC Is the stereotypical beta character who is 90% of his time thinking self deprecating thoughts but “some how” will pull the occasional confidence out nowhere. I find myself asking myself is he weak, irresponsible, secretly clever or just dense. i understand the mechanics of how a flawed character should behave as there are plenty of light novels that have this character motif of weak to strong (i.e second coming of Gluttony, Devils Son in Law, etc) but this MC leaves me literally flabbergasted. Its not a bad novel per se but i feel the MC is tryibg hard at being something he isnt. Eventually i will come back to this book perhaps but for me personally i just think unless you can deal with a typical beta MC who maybe through some past life act of valor (saving a universe, stopping Thanos’s snap, or defeating truck-kun) somehow ended up in a harem but not a harem (as some of the characters are plainly disrespectful or love him for absolutely no reason that can be found at all) that maybe this book isnt for you. Apologies to the author if this criticism is too harsh but im actually trying to temain objective about the failing points while remaining polite. TYVM.
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