Cycle of the Tides

This book is abandoned. No updates in MONTHS. Fair warning.

writing quality: Smooth reading with very few grammer mistakes.Story development: Well paced story however the direction is unclear giving a mysterious yet confusing feeling, leaving one curious.Character design: Characters are unique with in depth personal traits and quirks. Characters are described both physically and mentally.Updating stability: 1 chapter per day however it is I'll tril read World background: Mostly the school is what the plot js currently surrounded around. However, there are hints and facts proving or portraying the world as an alternate earth.

This book is highly annoying. MC acts like he’s twelve years old, but the author pretends he’s mature and steady and an ex-special forces member.So far, characters are typical and exceedingly one dimensional, the battles are boring, and the whole thing just feels like a generic cut and paste xianxia. Can not recommend.

good work for me,I would sayI like the MC's characterplease make room for explanation of cultivation levels.because so far the higher cultivation levels are a little confusing, I don't expect the reader to pause and start checking who's stronger than who.good and beautiful work so far, I hope it's eventually selected soonest.thanks.

Overall I'm only reading this because I'm bored. The writing itself is passable however the story lacks depth (Description  of the surroundings/world and the character himself) its literally Ayaan does that and this theres no background what so ever. Although I said the english is passable, would be nice to have the author or an editor to recheck the chapters and make it more smoothly. Only read 30 chapters so far, but it's a brainless read for me.

I really like how a baddass woman is mavys. You go girl! I really really like the fighting scene, the author narrated it very well. I am looking forward to the another upcoming scenes of the three: mavys, her brother and her uncle😊Overall the story is nice👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👏👏👏 good job authornim:)

The idea for a fanfic is interesting, but the author knows neither the original novel nor the series. Example: it is the year 289.Denerys is about 7-8 years old and the author writes that in two years he will help her escape during the wedding with Drogo, while in the original,during wedding she is 13 years old in book and 17in the series, Another example is Loras Tyrell who both in the book and and in the show is gay, here he is interested in MC's sister (his summoned general) who is a woman. The author literally writes that Loras Tyrell is not angry that MC refused to join him, which wouldn't allow him to get to know his beautiful sister, which is why he is a bit angry about it. But he is not desperate because his lands are full of beautiful women(Read up to Chapter 20)

Great plot, explores a lesser used concept of magus that often is taken by just mages or cultivators which is nice and the stories is great sets up good background and world building and were and how powerful the character the character is and and isn't currently! Great Potential that keeps getting more and more drawn out and excited too see more of it!