Confinement King LN

I can felt the delicious taste on my tongue, beautiful bitter-bitter taste, I chewed with a joy, even i dont realize if there is nothing left fried chicken in my plane.

"Interesting start for the story, I'd like to know what happens next and how it would turn around."

five stars I'm really enjoying the story so far the parts about building a kingdom and conquering other lands are really cool and amazing

First off I am new on this platform I read a few novels already thought.I feel this writer might be new to it I really like the idea and how the world picture could turn out. Its well written and i didn't see any typos or grammar issues which is rare.I feel the characters are a bit flat and the story is a bit slow with not enough details in fighting scenes and overall not enough details in the Training. But that could improve as it is just the 7th chapter now.Looking forward to read more of this.

Good plot. The opening premise is attention-grabbing. I like the way the characters are shaped. The story is well written, easy to understand, and really gets you involved.Keep up the good work.

I love this story, I have to put an amount of characters so please ignore this...,....................,...............,..............,.....

I would like to give a higher rating but I feel this story is more of a synopsis full of suspense and a sprinkling of philosophy. These are not bad but I think the story needs a bit more depth. More detailed descriptions of events instead of summarizing, clear definition of time frames. Clearer understanding of character relationships and dynamics. Side characters need a minimal amount of detail to flesh out their purpose in the story. I think this story is not bad but read with an introspective eye and it is more of a philosophical exercise in how humans may deal with ideas like betrayal, trust and paranoia.