Chronicles of Zach

>> Read this till 280 chapter. I was really looking forward to this novel. The idea of MC being famous coz of Alchemist profession was great but till Chapter 280 there is not an ounce of alchemy involved (it might be there in later chapters but it would have been better if MC mentioned it in earlier chapters on his plans and all)World building is nice. >> Character development is okay.>> Character growth and connections with others is kinda lame. >> Starting was good and I was really looking forward to it. Later, the story keeps me thinking as if written by some 16 yr old kid.>> @Author Don't get me wrong. I've nothing against you and I would love to see this novel grow more beautifully.I would love to help if you are looking for somebody to proofread.>> I would really like it if we could connect (to bounce some ideas) Pls reply back if u r okay with it and I will send my email.

A must read novel. Why is web novel giving preference to useless cliche novels and ignoring gems like this one. Hope this novel will be regular and get updated soon.

Its very rare to see cultivation novels that revolve around the law infact i know of none. .. this is a good story well written in a beautiful world, haven't reached far in reading it but so far so good.its worth looking into

Comenzó bien, la traducción es buena y da ganas de seguirla leyendo Yaque te atrapa con la historia y los personajes, unque parece que le están dando todo lo op al MC no lo es del todo ya que todo se lo gana con esfuerzo y en Dominio de Dios las oportunidades vienen con los riesgos

Oh, this is pretty cool! I didn't know what to expect going in, but your writing style resembles a merging of more traditional Western fantasy interactions and newer Light Novel-type storytelling. Very interested to see where this will go.

What greeted me was a.....

the little girl shock when he heard a voice in her back said in hurry " wh,,,,who ar,,, are you ?

"I will not part with this child." replied Bhumi stubbornly.