Checkmate Your Heart

what's up with you people rating it 5 stars when you don't even explain the reason why you like it? For me it was a total disappointment, it was okay at first but suddenly things just get distorted, mixed up and messy. btw i hate the way the author keeps pinpointing the carrot, I mean things are already getting messy and yet he's still forcing the carrot line to be inserted.

mate everything was fine and dandy. the story was good the character was good the background is kinda mysterious. the update stability so far is nice but there are some problems that author really needs to think about.  first of all what is this book about. it's game so you need to make it clear the data about the enemyy when they fight the reward that he gets,the quest that he takes, etc but instead this novel is like an urban slice of life romance type paced story or even an Japanese high school type story which is inconsistent from my point which makes it barely readable like a game novel should be and another point is the exaggeration of expression. for eg. if I say he smiled,".........." which makes sense but when you put he widely smiled,".........." then that makes it extremely exaggerated for me. if it's once or twice it's fine but if it's after every single time that he smiles you put widely after it then it makes it unpalatable for me. overall everything is extremely good but author should definitely focus on what he is writing about if he wants to make the novel a top class which the reader want to read again and again. thank youyour sincere reader

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VOTE FOR THIS NOVEL ITS SOOOO GOOD ONE OF THE BEST IVE READ AND FRANKLY INTERESTING AND AMUSING ITS SUCH AN ENJOYABLE READ AND YOU WONT WANT TO PUT IT DOWN AND THE MC IS ACTUALLY INTELLIGENT AND CAN THINK OF THE PROS AND CONS INSTEAD OF JUST HE MUST DIE AND HE DOESNT GO AROUND OFFENDING EVERYONE AND HE ACTUALLY DOES THINGS STEALTHILY AND THERES SO MUCH MORE DETAIL AND STUFF INSTEAD OF THE QUICK OVERVIEW YOU GET WITH OTHER NOVELS

The way you started your synopsis got me. When your role model is your mother then things are always an extreme for you. it's either too good because you have a good role model or too bad because your role model is not such a "role model" after all. looking forward to finding out which one our protagonist is

neutral review here, cant say much i only read until ch12 where someone is reincarnated. Ill just say im not interested anymore. Have fun reading if you read this comment 🥳.

Luna POV

The Queen makes a snapping gesture and her guards remove the man swiftly. They take him to the front of the castle and kick him out. The Queen starts to worry and realizes yes there is a problem.