just garbage, excluding the fact the novel goes premium at 20 chaps the english of the author is horrendous. the plot doesn't make sense and the novel doesn't spark any kind of excitement! you had plenty of time to make this good but you didn't, sorry if English isn't your first language.
Modern day novels are basically impossible to understand. Like the moral cover of these characters are nonsensical. I’ll try to explain.At one point the MC just straight up got a bunch of creatures to commit genocide on a bunch countries to spite one guy. All I’m saying is if you’re raised in the modern day by a good family with traditional values there’s no way you would do this. Especially because moral actions impact cultivation.This is because karma is an aspect of this novel. Committing misdeeds brings bad karma and punishment from the heavens. So the MC speaks of doing good deeds and not accruing bad karma unnecessarily but then goes and does this. Even if he can offset the karma to his clone I don’t buy it. His power up relies on teaching cultivation to as many people as possible. He just burned a fortune for no reason.So the MC is just a hypocrite with a nonsensical moral code. The characters are flat and dumb. The world of the novel is also just boring.Skip this one.
Flames, Fireworks, and Bombs...?I.. the Ultimate Arch-Wizard from the Crimson Demon Clan, Megumin shall read this novel!Five stars for the tag 'Explosion'!!
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