Card Master System

I like the idea . I think I'll enjoy this. I will return to update my review either good or bad in the future right now this is my encouragement to the author to see a continue writing this book since usually these type of novels make the protagonist 90% of the time as a warrior it isn't t bad but it is over done that it's become boring so seeing a puppeteer is something new and interesting, plus I wish you not to limit your imagination, you can make his string uses more than just controlling puppets make it also a weapon like the string string fruit from one piece and make him able to create his own puppet from wood or metal whatever please don’t make him use human corpses because it’s disgusting

"Homework?" the Writerz answered innocently, as if his soul was holy.

"Not until he says that he doesn't like me!" Esther said, determination was abundant in her voice.

"Rumors are these hero representatives are scouting for future talents. If we look at the current lineup, number one is definitely Lady Satan! Number two…"

As someone desperate for good fiction on Webnovel, I can confidently say this hits every spot. It's a 10/10 story. The idea is fresh, the writing quality is top-notch and the MC has a layered character.

A pretty nice concept of Time travel and scifi with a mix of fantasy and Magic. Not something I met everyday. The narration was splendid as it was nearing its perfection. Not something a newbie like can easily criticize. Haha Kudos!

Ok so mc is weak and finds metal ball which fuses with him, he instinctually knows how to use it, ok. Makes some sense if you think magic. Then mc gets a gene from food rather than killing an animal, unique. I like. That was chapter 1, from there it goes downhill rapidly. We are introduced to our first trope in chapter 2 or 3 in which we learn that the loser mc is friends with the martial school goddess, at this point every comment i read is people complaining or saying they drop because im leaving out some other reasons this is one star. Anyways, loser mc friends with goddess at start trope, check. Heres where the author makes a bigger mistake, 2 is not better than 1 if people hate 1, especially when the second goddess you add instantly after is the mcs little sister and the guys at the school are jealous of your "luck" with women when ONE OF THEM IS YOUR SISTER!!! Not even stepsister, and i know that wouldnt justify things but a lot of these authors try to justify with that excuse. Also mc stupid and him fighting Du Quan was clear plot force and will lead to cockroach young master being born just cause mc was stupid and chose to fight him when he had no need to, only a made up benefit which even the mc said that he coulda learned at any moment (the wolf technique). I hope this stops some from reading, this is just as bad as legend of the mythological gene and is just chasing after the old fame of it before it got nationalistic.

Hey, Reaper here, its one of my starting novel, so there may be some mistakes here and there, pls comment for it, and enjoy the book. Your reviews are most welcome