Can You Survive?

This novel has a good story and characters development however the non-premium chapters badly need editting. I unlocked the first premium chapter to check and it's easily more readable than the non-premium chapters I have read so far (chapter 25). The problem is the grammar and sentence structure are terrible. It's almost like every word in a sentence has been placed in a random order before moving onto the next sentence and repeating the same thing.Don't get me wrong, it's possible to read however I found that I was having headaches trying to read it. Everything else is absolutely fine my only problem is that I struggle to read it and it's taking the enjoyment out of the novel for me.The only reason everything else isn't 5 stars is because I can't read the story clearly enough to give a definite rating so I left them at 4 stars because the plot seems interesting and the author has some great ideas but without being able to properly read it I cannot happily rate it higher.I might try to continue reading if the chapters get eddited or just slowly over time in order to spread out the strain of reading it. Good luck author and I wish you the best but I can't personally read it yet.

I stumbled across this novel randomly and I was initially expecting a run of the mill ‘villain with a system’ perspective, but I am glad it subverted my expectations. The story is quite intelligent in that it introduces you to a ‘villain’ that is more of an anti-hero, in my opinion, who has advantages because of his rebirth and the system, but still has to use his wit and experience to figure things out as they come…he doesn’t just get everything handed to him on a platter.I also like that the plot is multi-layered and we find things out just as the protagonist does so in a sense we are living the experience along with him. I will say though that at the start, the plot was slow getting off the ground but it’s understandable since the author is learning the ropes as well.Overall, it’s a great book so far, and I can’t wait to find out more as things develop further!

Different then the norm and translation is not bad at all from what I've read so far. I like the mc as he's not stupid but not some scheming genius either,

ok, ok, ok so you can Multiply anything? So you need to ger money from a federation instead of just multiplying it? Even if you can'tmultiply money as long as you can multiply matter like it is said just go and multiply some Gold, diamonds etc and done? So why again did you join some federation? 😅

I feel the presence of arrogant young masters, face slapping's and forced romance in the midst of this novel. This description, this plot, it's all to familiar.

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Charging towards Seth whilst metal started to form around their hands the bandits started to attack him. At that moment time seemed to slow down for Seth, seeing one of the punches coming straight for his gut Seth twisted his body slightly dodging the punch. With time seemingly going as slow as it was Seth thoughts didn't seem to slow down at all. Seeing an opening on the first bandit Seth clenched his hand and swung as hard as he could towards the man's head.