Just some place, that's how I can describe it, as when I woke up, strangely enough as it is as I was sure I died, I found out that I couldn't see, feel, hear nor smell, I lost all of my basic senses, in fact I couldn't feel my body nor any of my limbs, yet I knew I was still alive, albeit not the same as I should be but I was alive.
Quickly resurfacing he gasped for breath instantaneously, only for a young women to run over to try and help him. She held out her hand which he immediately took for extra support. He noted how soft and smooth it was as he slowly caressed it with his thumb, whilst he was still in his daze, he didn't notice the women slowly turning red even though she berated herself because of how young he seemed.
It's a really good story and the translator is doing a good job here, except some rare gender mistake and word missing space. Try it if you like Unlimited Flow horror BL.
Honest review: In my opinion, you did a great job with the story development and world-building. However, some parts are hard to read. I'm not talking about the writing quality, but the names. I understand that you want to incorporate Filipino culture into the story, but for readers who aren't Filipino, some of the names are difficult to read. If you could adjust that part in later chapters, it would be better. I’ll keep reading — I’ve finished 8 chapters so far.Glory! x'D
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