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"No. I'm not going back. You can go back if you want. I am going to go fetch my siblings!" Ye Bai unhesitantly reply. He has some friends that are probably back in class too, but that doesn't mean that he is going to save them over his siblings. His bonds with his school friends aren't even that strong.

Then came the third guy. The last guy. The guy who loves me since I was in highschool.  I thought he would be my last. I did not love him from the start. I was playing safe. Even though I do not love him, I did gave him my unconditional trust. Trust him so much that I even hypnotised myself everyday. A matra in my mind 'I love him'. But alas even his love is just fleeting. He left saying He doesn't want me anymore.

In speed of lightning he charge upfront of Cera, eyes bulging in pure darkness. Out if fear, Cera let Olivus fall of on the ground.

Luckily the teachers and guards already looks at me pitifully and dropped their stance. They really trust this White Mage guy don't they?

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I came to withdraw my critical criticisms the mc he didn't go to Portugal but the mc doesn't need to win everything at the beginning he can go through some problems and mature I think it's better but I'm not a writer you know my opinion I love it so that's it

This story marks a lot of improvements over my first one, which I thought was pretty decent. The mc, Devon, has a pretty messed up backstory. I mean, your own father eating you is kind of insane. Then you add on to the fact that his villagers cheered and yeah.He is honestly a crashout. Yes, he is still very capable of love. He loves his brother from his old life, his mother from his new life, his dragon he finds a decent bit in, and eventually the Elven waifu Jehrya.But he is definitely out for revenge. If you think this will be a novel where he forgives his father, for better or worse just know that is not true.The anti hero tag absolutely fits. Although Devon is seen by some as a liberator, many also see him as a devil, demon, etc.During the story he tames pretty much every beast using his corruption skill.And there's a crazy twist way further in. Probably gonna take you guys a few years to reach it, so be nice to me or I'll spoil it right now ;).

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