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Not bad actually. Your story have unlimited potential especially set in a sandblock game like Minecraft. Character development is quite slow but smooth, suggest add in modpacks especially RL craft to make your story make more "sense". I can see your pattern of the story and plot, super excited for the next series.

Half these stories are either unreadable because the grammer is atrocious or the chapter itself is disgusting filth.............................

Hi, I'm the author of the adventurer system! Also, this is a shameless review.first of all, I don't have much vocabulary so some words are repeated, but I guarantee you that I already made each arc of the story. I admitted that there are some grammatical issues, but don't blame me English is not my native language hahaha! I will try to fix it as soon as possible.About Drake? All question has the answer, so stay tuned. To the readers, read my work I hope you enjoy it, I'm really glad this is the reason why I keep writing, thank you!

this novel is a breath of fresh air. it has good pacing and progression the system is interesting and shows the authors creativity the  main character isn't overpowered due to the system but he isn't weak either. overall it's just a well written and balanced novel

Ive read the book from start to finish took me 24hrs or longer Idk at this point. But I’ve finally found the time to rate. And overall it’s the best book out there in this app. This book has everything and the story keeps me hooked. Props to Mr. Author for his time and work to make this novel turn out the way it is.

~~~~~~~~I'm the second review. And I dont know what to say yet, since I haven't started reading~~~~~~~~~~~

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"It really is inconvenient but it's only for now. I just heard a few of our seniors say that the food this time will be extravagant to welcome our brother school."