The plotlint makes sure to keep you going the more the book continues to go. It's quite amazing to be honest, and I'm quite sure this book will keep me invested as I go,
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Only 2 chapters in and we find that Ice has betrayed Fire. Surprise!! This dumb dragon is so sore and resentful that he holds on through time and space to immediately bless his remaining power upon the loser MC who similarly has been abandoned by another chick.I already find that betrayal by a woman is the stupidest and most tired cliche of these novels. If a woman can motivate you that hard to be heaven-defying then maybe she should be the main character. But a story erected around 2 losers joining forces to prove their self-worth to a woman is just flaccid frottage.I'll put my 40 in but this is a lame - yes, limp - start.
i like the story however i think the mc could be better written he has some good moments however he is usually just as bad and treats even people who are nice to him badly. then about the pricing later on is between 15 - 20 coins i think it's pretty pricey considering most stories have 10 - 12 coins per chapter. despite everything i just said i still recommend the story it has its good moments i love world the story takes place in and think everyone should try reading it regardless of what i said
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