I like it but I’m tired of her always leaving him and frankly am not digging the betrayal and where it’s going. Next the one night stand will be preggo and she MFC will decide to give up yet another baby and then cry about it. I’m frustrated and impatient. Update more too pls.
The story has potential but I wasn’t feeling the first few chapters. The writer has a sense of humor though which their readers will love. My main problem was chapter transition. The chapters wasn’t cohesive to me. It’s like when you’re listening to music & 1 song ends abruptly b4 the next begins.
The more I think of this, the madder I am. The writer needs to fix this. I do not like Axelles betrayal. Maybe she just needs to be done with his psycho ass. Take her baby ,go live near Oracle, and build a nice life away from all the crazy. After all the crap he did to be with her and now this BS.
This is so frustrating. It had so much potential but the writing is frustrating, it had so much unnecessary dialogue that even if you skip a substantial amount of texts and just skim through it, nothing would change. The side characters had more scenes than the MC, they're so annoying, especially this Nainaie or something. Even if the MC sees his past self in her, he could clearly see that most annoying circumstances stemmed from her doing. She's so self-centered and selfish that she doesn't really have much awareness outside of what she is. The author clearly doesn't know what to do with the characters that he just half-assed most circumstances and he clearly doesn't know the direction he's supposed to go with this story. It could've contended with TCF but the difference in character consistency, direction and writing pulled it down. Waay down.
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