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there's so many change in the story it's annoying.. like how the girl disappeared when the dog attacked, and when it stated that she did not saw him in the forest, when she talk to him on the tree 😅
Here is my honest review after 30 chapters:Writing Quality: There are grammatical mistakes here and there, but it's acceptable and readable. You won't find the eloquence of a good cultivation novel, but it's still a passing grade. 4 starsStability of Updates: 7/week for now. Hitting the acceptable WN standard, so I gave this section 5 stars.Story Development: The story is carried by the fact that MC changed genders. The pacing is good, but it lacks a lot of details on important parts. MC has almost no struggles, thanks to the super OP system she received. 4 stars. I would have given it less, but I felt it unfair as the standard of cultivation novels here is not much. Character Design: The biggest weak point of this novel. Most of the characters have a personality, but the MC not only doesn't have one solid personality, but the author described her in a way, and she isn't acting like that. Also, the emotions are described but not felt in this novel at all. 3 starsWorld Background: It's more or less explained. You don't get many details on how things look like. The story focuses on development more than details. You get the info you need, though, which will be enough for you as a reader, so I don't complain. 4 stars.My subjective opinion: I started reading this one because the title piqued my interest. The current 35 chapters available were readable but sadly not enough to keep me going. So I'll be honest here. The story has potential, but the author is a beginner. Focusing on the right things, giving details where it's needed, showing feelings instead of explaining them. And avoid absurd situations that wouldn't happen in the story you write. Also, it would help if you learned how to wait for the right timing when you want to write something that you always wanted to implement in your story.Okay, my review turned into blatant schooling, and sorry for this. I hope the review helped the author and the readers alike:)
Be careful, Qidian. Ive been accumulating my resentment because of unpicked Lord of Enigma, Ubume Bird, the various abandoned and not updated great novels and seeing trash novels with 1000+ chapters. If this novel wont get picked, ill curse you with bad luck 3x a day, after mealtimes!
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