Black Mist: Daniek of the Black Blood

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"Aren't you tired?" she asked as she rubbed her eyes that were already half closed from sleep.

Secretary knew that and was glad. She will keep him at bay and not let him run around when he needs to work, and there is so much to do. He looked at the mountain of reports and books in the hall. They need more help. Some of officers and soldiers will soon start working on this.

Dating, in my perspective, wasn't like in romance novels or movies, we were to embarrased to talk to each other and we suddenly cut of our relationship and split ways. Wearing white reminded me of her, so to live with the break up instead of moping, I decided to wear bright colours and a white mask. I don't want anyone to ever fall in love with someone like me.

And all that glitters is gold

He'd of helped build up the country."

I looked up to see the group of beta players surrounding me. The same boss-conquering ones from earlier. They had accidentally tramped on my sand drawings.

The story has a good head start with the hero being a mafia boss and the first chapter shows promise that this has the potential to be a good read.

Story is Really Intresting, You will be hooked by Mc Next Move.Story is predictable and unpredictable at the same time.Just need to Improve a little, i mean really little it will become a masterpiece

The novel is awesome. I only gave her a 4.8 because I hate frieza from DB............................................................................