Black Belly Enchantress

'Y-You too!' the boy said smiling and waving back to him.

we both  got  in our stances

So much to do, so much to see

Kai: You can do that right?

Surprisingly, there is no way my sister could get hold of these petals. I was pretty sure she had no flower basket when she left. Besides, it's winter and carnations are rare in these region. Petals like these could cost a fortune and we certainly don't have money.

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

Great Author, best Novel!hope you for the best!

Oh would you look at that, you usual brain rot title, your usual horny mind cover page. What can you even expect on this site?...What's that? Wait, you mean this novel is good? Oh hell nah............is it?This novel is what I can only assume to be a continuation of OWE, the previous (incomplete) work by Mr. Stache. It follows our usual plot, you have the main character, annnnnnnnnnnd he's dead.Now's he's transmigrating? Oh wow, he's transmigrating into a nearly dead Villain in a novelesque scene. How Original!~Any moment now, we'll hit the regression button and go back to the ver--...Huh. No regression it seems. Instead, what is this, a Soap Opera? Ah... the characters are viewing the past thanks to some holy artifact, and they find out that the man that they put on death's door, the one who they thought of as the most villainous monster in history, he was in actually a soft man!? With a soft heart, that had no choice but to freeze under the assaults of the world. Wow, how sad...I can almost shed a tear...Tears for all the readers that dismiss this story as your usual webnovel bullshit. TL;DR: This novel is a gut-wrentcher that does not hold back on its punches when it slams the waterworks. Go read it, I'm not asking. Zi Long Ling Long Land Verisioness~~~Let's start with some concrete stuff before I start fan-boying. 1. Writing Quality: Top Notch. You hardly find any grammatical error, if any. Sentences? To the point, no BS mode. Obviously, it switches things up when expositions need to take center stage. To illustrate, long time webnovel readers of the modern day, the xianxia and system enthusiasts, the exposition sounds like a mirror. It's fun, humorous, and tries to give everything personality in a place where all you can find are edgelords who wish to see nothing but a similarly edgelord MC with a gazillion wives and strength that slaps people over and over again. It doesn't feel boring, but rather consistent. 8/10Update Schedule: Check the frequency of OWE's updates. You'd expect this new novel to be dead by now no? How surprising it must be, to find that the author hasn't missed a single fucking day since he first began?Let's hope he doesn't go on a long ass smoke break again.  10/10World Building: Take LoTM, but tone it down a few levels, and remove the 60 page exposition of how smooth and buttery the chicken peas are, or how juicy the pork is. Okay, maybe tone LoTM down a few more levels. Whatever it is, it's enough. The author expects you to go through the story and understand shit when needed, so he doesn't bore you with stuff. However, you can see that the world that they live in has history. Now how it develops in the future is not something I can say. For now, 6.3/10. Character Design: Take a character, introduce him/her to the main character, familiarize and build up rapport with the readers, and then kill them off. Textbook formula no?What's hard? Doing all this and executing in such a way that the death HITS.What's harder? Doing all THAT, in less than 90 chapters, TWICE, with a bunch of shit happening in the background. For those that we've gotten to properly experience, all I can say is that they are fleshed out as hell. But for the others who we haven't yet reached, they still live a lil 2D. And the crowd has personality, but not enough. For now, 6+Potential(10)/10Story Development: Twists here, twists there, plot points that make the author seem like a man with a plan (or a smartass, choose your fancysmansy), and wonderful execution to a point. Good shit. The characters act in a way that can be understood. As one 'I'm the second coming of Jesus' would say:Reasonable Development.  8.5/10 (high balling a teeny amount because of potential)..I started fanboying anyway. FUCK. Well, whatever. From what I've heard, the story won't be SS long, but more in the fields of 'it's enough.' Start reading, because no way in hell am I letting myself be the only one suffering due to cliffhangers. (binged the entire shit fortunately, and we're just now entering the new volume, so there's shit to be seen.)Overall rating: 4.6384/5. MOARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR--