Bible (CSB-Holman Publishing)

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A novel with a good but unfortunately wasted premise. -There is too much silly drama, almost everything is taken out of proportion. Whether the it is for romance or action, the spontaneous events happening around mc are not realistic. eg: Mc could be going to the shop only to find random enemies, girlfriend is attacked even though they should be completely alone. -No set up for the change of tone in the story, eg:quickly shifting from action to romance to dark. The events in the novel don't feel connected and is jarring. -Themes being added without any build up. The novel will shift from lighthearted to dark without any build up, catching those not interested in the dark themes unaware. -Whenever mc tries to say something wise, I can't help but think its pretentious eg:reminds me of my experience with naruto spouting platitudes. The feeling i get from the novel is like someone trying to explain something they don't understand. The novel would be better in my opinion... if it focused on a few themes from the beginning and had gradual development of the various events. Still worth reading but there isn't much to immerse in, only good for a casual read.

The translation is good, but that's pretty much the only thing that is good about this novel. Everything seems obvious, it is as generic as you can get. Classic plot with the disabled sister, dead parents. Classic friend (jade like beauty) with big background. I'm expecting serial faceslap beginning chapter 35+

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It is good and enjoyableI just don’ get why the author doesn’t make the mc buy basic passive skills that will help like enhanced senses of night vision or basic stuff like that that will be useful in a dungeon

It is good the story and the plot is not too much and easy to digest and also the mc is cool  more chapters plssss it is so good pls add more chapters i am addicted to this.

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CONSIDER THIS A SHAMELESS SELF PROMOTION FROM THE AUTHOR. I HOPE YOU WILL ENJOY MY WORK AND THE JOURNEY OF BUILDING CIVILIZATION. PLEASE RATE THE STORY IF YOU ENJOY IT!