As someone who finished the story I completely agree with your assessment
The characters were extremely boring barely any individuality and they spent most of there time repeating what they said or exaggerating everything that’s happening to make the story longer
The Mc barely has any character growth and become a total *ssh*l* near the end
All in all the story was pretty bad and the ending was supper rushed, the only reason I read it was because I wanted to finish my first story
Anyway as for suggestions I always recommend the birth of the demonic sword or the innkeeper if you haven’t read them yet
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The characters were extremely boring barely any individuality and they spent most of there time repeating what they said or exaggerating everything that’s happening to make the story longer
The Mc barely has any character growth and become a total *ssh*l* near the end
All in all the story was pretty bad and the ending was supper rushed, the only reason I read it was because I wanted to finish my first story
Anyway as for suggestions I always recommend the birth of the demonic sword or the innkeeper if you haven’t read them yet