Beta to Luna

I hope this book will be as great as the first one but still I’m just starting out and only a few chapters in. There are already errors and name mix ups. It shows that the author does not proof read, edit or go back to fix anything after it’s been pointed out.

It gets better, way better if you havent continued with it. I'll admit the first 250ish chapters feel slow and awkward but it gets more interesting later on.

Though, I kinda like the premise. Still, I don't quite get Xia Yuqing is very adamant on her views about yaoi and BL. She's a hardcore fanatic.Her dialogue really hurts one's eyes. You can't force your beliefs to someone, like c'mon.

The amount of times the author says the same thing in different ways is actually astounding. You have one chapter of one guy saying “he is so scheming i have to be wary” and that is literally the whole chapter. The author is deeply enlightened in the dao of word count.

For those who came after watching the anime, you should start at chapter 165

rape and orc tags? count me in

YESSIR

well its still kinda tragic its gonna take such a long time for anything to happen but its still good knowing something is gonna happen

Another Stunner from Muse. What can I say, your writing takes me on the journey with the characters. Bring on the next book.

"Well, what you both had…It happened so sudden that there was no time to think it through. The feelings came also pretty intense that both of you become totally aggressive with it but at some point, it will just subside and you'll wake up one day realizing that all the feelings were gone"