Balada Maharaja Nusantara

They killed a dummy

1-79 felt bland80,200,300 onward start to pique my interest.Overall good choice of read. Able to evoke my emotion, but mostly are happy, sad on the otherwise, almost negligible. Need some arcs that would pierce my heart and lasting.

Despite the fact that I like the story there are many glaring issues. The cultivation system doesn’t make sense. You can either be a martial artist, a mage, or both. In order to increase your rank you must open up meridians which there are nine of. However if you practice both then you need to share so the ratio becomes 5/4 which means you are weaker than a pure mage and martial artist when instead you should be stronger so the concept doesn’t make sense. Instead it should be different concepts such as using dark energy to increase bodily functions, and strength for martial artists and for mages they could convert that energy into mana which is stored somewhere in the body. The author also creates these “spaces” that are very confusing and quite frankly shouldn’t exist.

well..this is a really interesting book. the main mc is different  which is nice. the flow is good . minor adjustment with commas and it will be good.

I CAME HERE, SAW THIS NOVEL, GOT INTERESTED AND READ THE SYPNOSIS.AFTER READING IT, I GOT INTERESTED AND TAPPED ON THE AWAITING RELEASE OPTION.PLEASE GET SELECTED.THANK-YOU.(I'm too lazy, I saw this review, liked it, and gonna use it.)

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Ha! So stupid, the Author is so stupid! He should have been attracted to the "True Immortal Cultivation Faction" from the first time he cultivated because he gathered all qi in the whole globe to the location of that idiotic Mc. And as that idiot said he is the only one who can cultivate the qi in the atmosphere, so if there is this so-called True Immortal Faction then they should also know the qi in the atmosphere and had long traces that idiot. Really "True Immortal Cultivation Faction" has no role in this story, the author probably added this None-Twisted faction to prolong the story.

Awesome book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Thanks for the chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Would recommend this book to continue to be translated