Imma put it on pause, chap 980.
-this book had the potential to be 5 stars. The author strong points are :making likeable characters, balanced power scale and overall interesting powers, very good humor(plot kinda basic and linear tho). The characters are so well written and interesting that mc isn’t even top 3.
- why is this the biggest fumble in the history of novels? Author randomly decides to adopt a “system” even tough he is perfectly capable to write and doesn’t need any crutch to progress his novel, in fact, the system messes up the whole story and adds tens of gigantic plot holes that leave a bad aftertaste while reading it. Its literally self sabotaging, actually wicked work on his part.
-also the romance is unfortunately bad… yeah ik its a slow burn and shi, but slow burn has to make sense, u cant progress one chap and then the next one ur back to square one. I feel like bro added romance only so he could fit a few more snarky jokes in.
Thank you for writing Unexpectedly Mine -a story about Joshua & Alice & their journey to be better together and their HEA ...️... this story opened doors for many side stories & other main stories.. I am waiting to read all of your upcoming books ...
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-this book had the potential to be 5 stars. The author strong points are :making likeable characters, balanced power scale and overall interesting powers, very good humor(plot kinda basic and linear tho). The characters are so well written and interesting that mc isn’t even top 3.
- why is this the biggest fumble in the history of novels? Author randomly decides to adopt a “system” even tough he is perfectly capable to write and doesn’t need any crutch to progress his novel, in fact, the system messes up the whole story and adds tens of gigantic plot holes that leave a bad aftertaste while reading it. Its literally self sabotaging, actually wicked work on his part.
-also the romance is unfortunately bad… yeah ik its a slow burn and shi, but slow burn has to make sense, u cant progress one chap and then the next one ur back to square one. I feel like bro added romance only so he could fit a few more snarky jokes in.