Anyone else struggling with this? I feel like its got good bones but everything feels. . . choppy and robotic. . . like sometimes i feel like i have no idea whats going on, the incessant need to use different names for one person even when theres only a single person seems over used and redundant to the point where you feel like they are talking about multiple people instead of one. . . the FL is robotic and even though she says she likes him it seems more like shes thinking about everything too clinically and cold, like shes dissecting the relationship and how it should be like shes trying to do it all locigally instead of emotionally. . .
Many high ranked Novel in here usually has many POV change to side characters all the time, like "Extra POV", "i'll surpass the MC", and few more, so i'm glad that this one mainly focusing on the MC most of the time.
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