Ascension Core: A Cyberpunk Story

overall good book, good job author keep it up.

The story is actually very good. It’s a humorous take on ‘cringey’ self-insert OCs you’d make up as kids with OP powers and skills. The main character’s horror at his own ‘cringey’ behavior and his constant internal dialogue really ties it together in a way that’s fun and kinda new. The world builing is really intricate and nice too.However THIS version of the novel unreadable. At first I noticed the lack of apostrophes and was like “no big deal, I can infer the proper words no issue” but then I realized that along with apostrophes there were absolutely no QUOTATION MARKS TO DENOTE DIALOGUE.There are so many lines you can’t distinguish from narration, inner dialogue, and spoken due to the casual tone of the novel making it basically impossible to read without giving yourself a headache.Really a shame, I had originally read over 200+ chapters of this story and was looking forward to finally reading the ending.

I think this is good for now,  Story progress is too little so i can't say for sure.

The first chapter is interesting. There's something that draws emotions following the MC's feelings, as far as I've read it's quite intriguing, there are many things that make me curious. I hope the continuation is explained one by one~