Is this a joke? Where's the ambition, the urgency - emotions even! The protagonist isn't a human. He doesn't know how to think for himself, let alone what critical thinking is. You can put a human-shaped cardboard in place of the protagonist and still have story progress in the exact same way as this has been going. Nothing the protagonist does matters, even his cultivation depends on the author's mood. He will sometimes stagnate for years on end, and other times rapidly increase in cultivation with no rhyme or reason.
Where are the chapters at the front? If I gotta start this I wanna know what happens at the beginning as well. Furthermore, this story doesn't make sense if you start from the centre.
Embarrassing as a proud system holder, he gives his only cheat to a girl he doesn't even know. Now she can become a cheat existence in his stead. Because he is too braindead to survive for more than 5 years in the simulator himself. When he could simply wait for good talents to show up... Pathetic really.
Here’s just something that should be noted before you readers start my novel.1. The Mc will be OP, but there will be a balance. And, of course, he would have some rationality to think cuz he ain’t an idiot.2. There will be a little harem, fortunately or unfortunately, for some of you. And yes, that means there will be romance.3. MC is the playful type that almost doesn’t care about what happens, but he’s always thinking seriously inside.4. If you have any questions, feel free to ask.MY ENTRY TO WPC 320If you like the story so far, please consider lendingufffc me your power stones and maybe a review. :3I will try my best for regular updates if my novel wins.
Good. Pretty good in my opinion. Unique transmigration plot despite there being a little bit of redundancies when writing. Appreciating this novel, I hope others take a chance and read this novel.
I just read the description for the book. But my brain was already exploding from this *****. My God I'm going to read this. Author, if I am disappointed in this book, know that I will leave 5 stars, as the description made me just catch an orgasm
Writing Quality 5Stability of Updating 5Story Development 5 Character Design 5World background 5Fantastic = action, romance, and drama, give them 100/100 each
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